Friday, March 18, 2011

Where the Sidewalk Ends Haiku

Here are some more haiku drawn from Shel Silverstein's poem "Where the Sidewalk Ends."



They-- the there wind blows,
slow pace the winds, winds-- And with
the walk place measured.


The rests bends, rests walks
asphalt pits. The sidewalk and
children where we walk.


Mostly, though, selecting based on word frequency gives me a lot of 'and', 'to', and 'for' in the haiku.  Especially 'and':


and And flowers where
Let sidewalk is sidewalk And
For peppermint to


chalk-white place And and
there the To slow the And grows
soft The us For the


I was hoping that incorporating word frequency would give me something slightly better than just including random words, by somehow sticking a little bit "truer" to the text, but it clearly comes with its own set of drawbacks.

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