Tuesday, March 1, 2011

Haiku for March 1

The second haiku composed based on the 500-haiku database:


 eating bread dust, heart
eating of me— resting swans
  on…  alone with leaves


Like before, I added in the punctuation myself.

This is one of my favorite haiku Poesytron 575 has written to date.  Melancholy is present in every line.  For me at least, it creates a clear setting and is thematically solid.  This is exactly the type of thing that I hoped the code could generate.

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