Thursday, February 9, 2012

Storms Dribbling

When I first read this haiku:

rocky jewel the
song established the from skies
clearing storms dribbling

my brain completely skipped over the "the" in between "established" and "from."  What clear sentence structure, I thought, as my mind pieced it together as:

Rocky jewel.
The song established from skies clearing,
storms dribbling.


But, alas, Poesytron doesn't know grammar or syntax (and the way it's currently coded, it favors common one-syllable words like "the"), so the actual haiku is pretty nonsensical.

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