Monday, June 13, 2011

Haiku for June 13th: Handful of Trying

Handful of trying,
to the, to the hands. Fog, the
barn, the cross table.


Usually when the word "the" appears in a haiku this many times, it doesn't make a lot of sense--particularly if Poesytron gets stuck in a loop like "to the to the."  (The Poesytron haiku that I tend not to share have a lot of jumbles of prepositions and thes without any nouns.  "The and of", "my with a the", etc.)  But I thought this one somehow came together.

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