Monday, May 30, 2011

Haiku for May 30th: Zig-Zag Afternoon

Zig-zag afternoon.
Heat yawns back from the, it a.
Too weightless ridges.


Friday, May 27, 2011

Haiku for May 27th: Strange Be Remembering

Frog's fountain jerk, the
of breathing river foam, the
strange be remembering.


Wednesday, May 25, 2011

Haiku for May 25th: Beirut Daughter

Beirut daughter names
me thankful. Gone in and thin
to leftovers of...

 

Monday, May 23, 2011

Haiku for May 23rd: Ice Hard Sharp

Slips sun, ice hard sharp.
Blunt thoughts slices sour thoughts-- is
gone.  Ice.  The flash pines.


This is one of those where the decisions I make on formatting can really change the reading of the haiku.  Is it "Slips sun, ice-hard sharp," or rather "Slips sun-ice, hard sharp"?

Some other formatting options could be:


Slips sun ice hard, sharp
blunt thoughts. Slices sour thoughts is--
Gone ice. The flash. Pines.



Or maybe:

 
Slips. Sun ice hard. Sharp.
Blunt. Thoughts slices sour. Thoughts is
gone. Ice the flash pines.


Poesytron has no "intention" when it creates.  In formatting its haiku for you, the reader, I am another author--or a translator, maybe, an intermediary force that shapes the poem and influences the meaning ascribed by your mind.

I am sure this intermediary step could also be automated, but I am in no way ready to tackle that computing challenge.

Friday, May 20, 2011

Haiku for May 20th: Lonely Loneliness

Lonely loneliness.
On white, the skin bowl, skin tip,
dark back. No plays. Young.


Wednesday, May 18, 2011

Haiku for May 18th: Attack the Fabric


Boy
I
The attack

Twisted
Perfuming
Twisted

Attack the fabric


Monday, May 16, 2011

Haiku for May 16th: Grooming Whiskers Sport


Minnows stones raked, the
haiku humble. She thus, no—
grooming whiskers sport.